green leaves fall —
I wonder how to sign
cicada
green leaves fall —
I wonder how to sign
cicada
summer wedding
men in straw fedoras gossip
under the trees
The line one fragment sets the scene for a summer wedding; the line two and three phrase provides viewers with a view of men in their “straw fedoras” “gossiping under the trees. Readers do not know whether the scene takes place before or after the marriage; we only see them captured in a time snapshot wearing their summer hats and conversing under the trees—truly, a memorable Norman Rockwell moment portrayed in words. john daleiden — “two are better than one” choice haiku
the new issue of Sketchbook — A Journal for Eastern and Western Short Forms is live and I’m pleased to announce that John Daleiden has included two of my haiku in his editor’s choice ‘Pond Sights, Sounds and Seasons’ — thank you, John! a lovely surprise!
the next haiku thread is ‘wedding/ bride’ –stop by and join the fun!
this path
somewhere the sound
of water
#211 — ‘pond life’ haiku thread … the zen space … haiku share day 26
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