1374

 

 

spring dawn
outside the window
a flutter

 

a flutter
outside the window
spring dawn

 

 
ku-on-this

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1374

5 thoughts on “1374

  1. aloha Angie. yeah, i think this works the same both ways so that it remains essentially the same. sometimes i find i prefer one order to the other altho both reveal the same thing. in this case i go back and forth and like both.

    cool on Marie’s ku too. it was an interesting challenge when i first attempted it too. one of the things i like about haiku thinking is it makes me look at structure and word use in different ways sometimes. and in the end i hope that is improving the way i write haiku. way cool on that.

chirp

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