deer tracks
outside the spare room window
in melting snow
deer tracks in melting snow
stop
outside the spare room window
(what did she expect
to see)
deer tracks
outside the spare room window
in melting snow
deer tracks in melting snow
stop
outside the spare room window
(what did she expect
to see)
feathers 
I like these a lot. They work so well read together.
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oh, thanks!
I hadn’t really thought of reading them together — just wrote the longer one first then decided to “haiku” it (and I got caught on twitter so I posted them both!)
it really happens; the deer seem to come up to the window all the time; I suppose they’re sniffing through the plants, but it seems sometimes like they come peeking. 😀
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