1211 September 2, 2012 | angie werren corn maker moon running all week just to sit still nahai (one line) … abernaki … a feathered photo About these ads share a featherShareLike this:Like Loading...
this moon name puts me in mind of *shiners* and bell jars full of booze; I think there’s a still running somewheres… Reply
Me like. (But then I like most all you write… ) However, here, this time, written all on one line, and I suppose it’s silly of me, but I like this unified format. Much. (go figure) (but nice) Reply
thaks, neil. I like the one-line haiku, too. I do them now and again, but this one was for a prompt. johannes s.h. berg asked us to: “Write a one-line haiku adhering to the ”normal” techniques of haiku (jux & breaks/cuts). NOT a fluid/spoken/normal line.” I like the one-lines because there can be several possibilities of meaning, depending on where you breathe. Reply
It’ll have caught up with itself by next month.
this moon name puts me in mind of *shiners* and bell jars full of booze;
I think there’s a still running somewheres…
Me like. (But then I like most all you write… ) However, here, this time, written all on one line, and I suppose it’s silly of me, but I like this unified format. Much. (go figure) (but nice)
thaks, neil. I like the one-line haiku, too. I do them now and again, but this one was for a prompt. johannes s.h. berg asked us to:
“Write a one-line haiku adhering to the ”normal” techniques of haiku (jux & breaks/cuts). NOT a fluid/spoken/normal line.”
I like the one-lines because there can be several possibilities of meaning, depending on where you breathe.